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Přidejte seLet them teach me how to live
11. 11. 2000
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Quijote
Existential poem written in a moment of Angst. The original poem was written in Spanish, which is much better than its English translation...traduttore, traditore :-)
wow !!! it´s very...very...good ??? no no´it is veryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryveryvery good.....;o)))
I don't see no Angst, it's a nice poetry.I like it very much.You've got my atention.Tip for originality.
Bienvenida! Bien bien, mi español es malo que peor, pero gocé las ambos versiónas de tu poema... Una vez más, dé la bienvenida aquí!
Carino!! enhorabuena!!! ahora te quiero conocer aun mas!! que te parece??? el 28 de diciembre (es jueves) a la puerta de Palacio Nacional! vamos a ver las fuentes y me declamas otros poemas... un beso! Jo
thanks a lot, very good ! I just felt terrible when I read the second half with a huge dictionary.. and finaly I realized.. ;-)
Have a nice day. Walking through the thorny bushes pick up some roses
I'M EVERYTHING, I'M POET!!!!!!!!
Sorry, don't know Spanish, but I'd like to... May be in the future...
Nice day
Good!! It's worth a point!
I'm trying in vain to catch the life, it is passing through my fingers and one day I'll be wondering whether my life was hollow and I'll be afraid what the answer will be.
Indeed, I like the Spanish version more, it sounds so much better!! Could you also publish the Spanish version of your first work (Bez Imiena)??
Think that I have to learn English little bit much more! But bigest part I understood. Nice. I can't Spanish unfortunately but - moc krásné a měkké jak postýlka pro panenky ze snu o říši za zrcadlem.
Muy bueno... y pienso que la versión (?) Inglesa es (casi?):) tan bonita como la Espaňola:))