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Please, can I creep in ?

08. 03. 2005
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VenusHalley

sorry, nechtelo se mi s tim prekladat:P

please, can I creep in ?
'cause I am searchin'
maybe for some sense of life
And I lost my connection
right now I need some protection
I don't need your attention
oh, I didn't I mention
I need something more
Well, I guess I was here before
could I win this war
with what I've got ?
sorry, I forgot
you might want to know my name
but it will feel the same
so let me let you know me
but this isn't for me
so don't make me feel blue
so used and un-new

pardon me if I knew
I would do it anyways
no, I won't change my ways
because of you
is it the end, or is it the beginning
what are you saying, words have to meaning
right now
please, can I creep in ?

misty
08. 03. 2005
Dát tip
a little bit cliche....

jenaL
08. 03. 2005
Dát tip
exept some mistakes, quite fine one!*

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