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What I Saw in Her Eyes

06. 09. 2001
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Monie_Kim

.... it was a gloomy day

A little girl was sitting on the stairs

her eyes full of thousands pains.

It had started to rain

and I was passing her again.

 

 

Her eyes were so big and so sad

but she proudly held up her head

clinging firmly and much more

to her brown-haired little doll.

 

 

I passed her and wished to know

what makes people to fall so low

to run down their lives and the others too.

Oh - how much I wished I knew.


Albireo
07. 09. 2001
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Dare say, the contents is not terribly good and some rhymes are very primitive: stairs/pains, more/doll??? Sorry.

Monie_Kim
07. 09. 2001
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All is allowed to be said, so no need for being sorry. Nobody's perfect and I am no exception. Maybe next time ;-)

Gastarbajtr
06. 09. 2001
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........to já taky.......

Atala
06. 09. 2001
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Ooops...I did it again...again??? Again!!! *

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